Revision: Article First Page
This is my new article. I changed pretty much everything in it because my draft was not professional. After I got my new pictures I distributed them to the specific places, and I thought the picture of Terrell Pack would fit nicely. I was very pleased with my new article. I did not change the content in the article, but we all added a watermark to the top corner of the page, just to make things look crisper. In addition, I also changed where the picture was because in my draft, I thought the picture was too drug out to each corner and it did not look professional. I made the font smaller for the heading as well. I also forgot to add my name in my draft, so I added it on my final. It took me a long time to figure out the spacing and making sure words did not get cut off my article. I also wanted the pull-out quote that I used to be big enough so that it stood out from the rest of the article. I justified my text as well, but one thing that frustrates me is how some words are more spaced...